Six Sentence Sunday #3

29 Jul

Thanks for stopping by to share my Six Sentences. I am continuing to post from my current WIP “Kissed By A Rose.” This scene takes place just after Kendra, Candice’s supervisor, confronts Candice with one of the special services that The Rose offers its guests.

The first line belongs to Candice after the “demonstration” is over.


“Why did you show me that?”
“You seemed to enjoy it.”
“That’s not the point. We had no business being in there.” She pointed at the door. “We just walked into someone’s room unannounced; a huge no-no in any hotel I’ve worked at.”


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4 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday #3”

  1. Maryellen Brady July 30, 2012 at 5:21 am #

    Oh, she should be getting the idea this is not like any of the other hotels she’s worked at!! cool six!!

  2. maddiecochere July 30, 2012 at 5:58 am #

    Ooh! So many unanswered questions. Was anyone in the room when they entered? What special service was Candice shown? What did she enjoy? The Rose is a memorable hotel, I’m sure. 🙂 Nice six.

  3. Samantha Paige July 30, 2012 at 11:27 am #

    Great six! Makes me wonder…

    • emilysfletcher August 5, 2012 at 8:57 am #

      Thank Samantha. I think intrigue is as important to erotica as the sex – I believe that you need to have characters and environments that draw you in.

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